Monday, September 27, 2010

Contest Stage 3: Numero Tres


Okay so the third character is about to be revealed. They are you're typical american girl, but with a few burning differences. ;)

Kristina “Krackel” Harpen

Age: 17, July 13th, 2017
Nationality: American: Caucasian
Birthplace: Greensboro, SC
Raised in: Cincinnati, OH
Skin: Tan
Hair/Eye color: Reddish brown/ Red Iris
Power: Able to manipulate heat to raise or lower temperature and control fires

       Kristina has a slim figure. She weighs only about 120 pounds, and she is about 6’ 1” tall. She normally wears a white or light pink shirt under a flaming red jacket. She normally wears jeans, and on occasion, shorts. She wears red shoes with flames on the side. She has a huge fire tattoo on her back to cover up a scar on her back from when she was burned(see background). She also has red eyes that if you look into them, they seem to glow a fiery red. Her hair is a fiery red, that when she is threatened, can be set aflame.

       Kristina has a “fiery” personality. She may seem calm and shy at first, but when you get to know her, well, let’s just say, don’t make her mad. She gets mad very easily and unleashes her wrath on anything, and anybody, around her. Other than her occasional flare-ups, she is pretty laid back. She loves to just chill and listen to her iPod along with reading a couple magazines. This was before she was threatened by her distant family. She is now constantly alert for enemies without letting you know she is alert. She can easily feel threatened and can be set aflame in an instant. (Don’t sneak up on her.)

       Kristina, as a little girl, was abused by her aunt and uncle, whom she had to live with due to her parents both dying from unknown causes. She grew up this way, never letting anyone know what she was going through. Finally, she came to her 16th birthday. For her special birthday, her aunt and uncle made her a cake, with candles and everything(how sweet!). When her back was turned, her uncle dumped the cake on her, lit candles and all. It set her clothes on fire. She was able to extinguish the fire, without an extinguisher or rolling on the ground. She was left with a giant scar on her back, and emotional scars for the rest of her life.

      Kristina has the special ability to control fire and heat. Although she is not able to create heat, she is able to manipulate the heat and fire around her in any way she wants to. She can spread fires making them more destructive. She can also raise temperatures of the human body, with a lot of energy, and be able to kill them. She is also very flexible. She is in great physical health and fitness, sadly, the same cannot be said for her emotional health. If she even feels the slightest bit threatened by anyone or anything, her body temperature will rise, allowing her power to increase in being able to manipulate heat. At these moments she is her strongest.

Okay so I thought that this was a good character. All areas were fulfilled, and I could form a picture of Kristina, who had many distinct features to her. I like how everything in her personality, clothing, and appearance tied into her powers. She would make a very good recurring villain. The knocks however would have to be that there wasn't much detail in the description, and she seemed semi-generic and underdeveloped. Good effort however and still has many twists that can be made so If you liked Kristina make sure to vote!!

All Areas Fufilled: 10/10
Personality: 7/10
Imagery: 9/10
Impact: 7/10
Creativity: 8/10
Realism: 10/10

Overall Score: 51/60 Solid Versatile Character



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