Current

Hay! I'm Aulene. I am new on here and I have never posted on here before. I'm super nervous for you to see my writing. No one has ever seen my writing before so I am open to criticism. Quinton and I have been friends for about a year and he has been creeping on me to join the blog. I have been writing ever since I had to move in ninth grade. My writing is all very dark but I promise I am not that bad in real life... kinda. Please post your comments and help me improve and grow. Thank you so much!!!!!!!!

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Can you feel it?
A current.

A current of thoughts,

dark thoughts.

Oh no... he saw me,

at the party.

I just wanted to yell

No!

Not him,

I don't.

I didn't.

I wouldn't.

NEVER!

Oh no.

The current died

and then I sat down.
Down to a dark place,

gone forever.

The current is not there

to pull me back up

to the surface

to breath.

The current is gone

from me

forever...



~Edited by Sharon